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You recently bought a children's toy online but when it arrived it was damaged

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing in the hope that you can help me with a problem regarding a children's toy that I recently bought. On 8 th May I purchased a toy from " New Life "store at Navai. The toy cost $200 and I paid for it on my credit card. I discovered to my horror, that the box which contained the toy did not include the eyes. I have been a very loyal customer of your company for many years and this is certainly not the quality that I have come to expect from you as you are the representative of the company in this company I would be grateful if you could arrange for the parts to be sent to me. I attach a copy of the reciept with this letter for your information. I look forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully Lucy

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 attach a copy of the Possible spelling mistake found.receipt
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