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say what activities Alice can do to stay healthy. include types of healthy activities and ways to relax. say why it is important to stay healthy. use should/ shouldn't I should not I have to I don't have to I do not have to. write 80-100 words.

say what activities Alice can do to stay healthy. include types of healthy activities and ways to relax. say why it is important to stay healthy. use should/ shouldn't I should not I have to I don't have to I do not have to. write 80-100 words. Ed2Wb
Hi Alice, I think it's a good idea to play football or do yoga. These activities help you stay healthy. By playing football your body becomes stronger and it helps you when you age. Also doing yoga helps you relax and gives you peace of mind which is good for your mental health. On the other hand, you should make sure you get enough sleep every night between seven and ten hours. I think being healthy gives you more energy and makes you feel good. From, K
Hi Alice,

I
think
it's a
good
idea
to play football or do yoga. These activities
help
you stay healthy. By playing football your body becomes stronger and it
helps
you when you age.
Also
doing yoga
helps
you relax and gives you peace of mind which is
good
for your mental health.

On the other hand
, you should
make
sure you
get
enough
sleep every night between seven and ten hours. I
think
being healthy gives you more energy and
makes
you feel
good
.

From,

K
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IELTS letter say what activities Alice can do to stay healthy. include types of healthy activities and ways to relax. say why it is important to stay healthy. use should/ shouldn't I should not I have to I don't have to I do not have to. write 80-100 words.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
86 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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