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say what activities Alice can do to stay healthy. include types of healthy activities and ways to relax. say why it is important to stay healthy. use should/ shouldn't I should not I have to I don't have to I do not have to. write 80-100 words.

say what activities Alice can do to stay healthy. include types of healthy activities and ways to relax. say why it is important to stay healthy. use should/ shouldn't I should not I have to I don't have to I do not have to. write 80-100 words. Ed2Wb

Hi Alice, I think it's a good idea to play football or do yoga. These activities help you stay healthy. By playing football your body becomes stronger and it helps you when you age. Also doing yoga helps you relax and gives you peace of mind which is good for your mental health. On the other hand, you should make sure you get enough sleep every night between seven and ten hours. I think being healthy gives you more energy and makes you feel good. From, K

Hi Alice,

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it's a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 to play football or do yoga. These activities This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you stay healthy. By playing football your body becomes stronger and it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 you when you age. Also
 doing yoga This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 you relax and gives you peace of mind which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for your mental health.

On the other hand
, you should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sure you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 sleep every night between seven and ten hours. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 being healthy gives you more energy and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 you feel This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
.

From,

K

IELTS letter say what activities Alice can do to stay healthy. include types of healthy activities and ways to relax. say why it is important to stay healthy. use should/ shouldn't I should not I have to I don't have to I do not have to. write 80-100 words.

Letter

American English

5 paragraphs

86 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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