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I am writing to express this letter my strong dissatisfaction with air company what flew an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane.

I am writing to express this letter my strong dissatisfaction with air company what flew an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. 6LRAW

I have been a very much in plane. But servants not honoured good service why people were much. However on the 15 th may, I flew to USA because for having a rest. I booked one of your foods through a pizza. It were problems remained cold food, I need eat hot lunch. I discovered to my horror, that the box which contained the pizza did not cooked clear. Too coffee not become I thinked. I canceled contract with this company. If not want so much becoming, free ticket giving asked me. I do not believe that I want is my money back or to have this ticket replaced with one that works properly. I will gladly replaced ticket. I look forward to receiving you reply. Yours faithfully.

I have been a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
plane
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 servants not Possible spelling mistake. 'honoured' is British English.honored
honoured
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 service why This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 were much. However
 on the Did you mean "15th"?15th
15 th
 may, I flew A determiner is probably missing here: "to the USA".to the USA
to USA
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 for having a rest. I booked one of your foods through a pizza. It were problems remained This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 food, I need eat hot lunch. I discovered to my horror, that the box which contained the pizza did not The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: "cook"cook
cooked
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
. Too coffee not become I Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "thought", the past tense form of the verb 'think'?thoughtthankedthinkerthinnedchinked
thinked
. I canceled contract with this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. If not want This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much becoming, free ticket giving asked me. I do not believe that I want is my money back or to have this ticket replaced with one that works properly
. I will gladly
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "replace"replace
replaced
 ticket. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to receiving you reply. Yours faithfully
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