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I am writing to express this letter my strong dissatisfaction with air company what flew an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane.

I am writing to express this letter my strong dissatisfaction with air company what flew an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. 6LRAW
I have been a very much in plane. But servants not honoured good service why people were much. However on the 15 th may, I flew to USA because for having a rest. I booked one of your foods through a pizza. It were problems remained cold food, I need eat hot lunch. I discovered to my horror, that the box which contained the pizza did not cooked clear. Too coffee not become I thinked. I canceled contract with this company. If not want so much becoming, free ticket giving asked me. I do not believe that I want is my money back or to have this ticket replaced with one that works properly. I will gladly replaced ticket. I look forward to receiving you reply. Yours faithfully.
I have been a
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very
much in
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plane
.
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But
servants not
Possible spelling mistake. 'honoured' is British English.
honoured
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good
service why
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people
were much.
However
on the
Did you mean "15th"?
15 th
may, I flew
A determiner is probably missing here: "to the USA".
to USA
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because
for having a rest. I booked one of your foods through a pizza. It were problems remained
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cold
food, I need eat hot lunch. I discovered to my horror, that the box which contained the pizza did not
The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: "cook"
cooked
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
. Too coffee not become I
Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "thought", the past tense form of the verb 'think'?
thinked
. I canceled contract with this
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company
. If not want
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so
much becoming, free ticket giving asked me. I do not believe that I want is my money back or to have this ticket replaced with one that works
properly
. I will
gladly
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "replace"
replaced
ticket.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
look forward to receiving you reply. Yours
faithfully
.

IELTS letter I am writing to express this letter my strong dissatisfaction with air company what flew an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
128 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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