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You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it.

You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it. ylYr
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to let you know that few of the paper work along with an accessory was missing from the box with respect to my purchase from your shop. On 13th March 2021, I had bought a camera from your electronic shop in Chicago downtown. The make of the camera is of Sony and the model number is VXI232. I was disappointed when I opened the box and found the manual along with the warranty card and HDMI cable was missing. If I could recall correctly, the shop had only one of its kinds available which was an open box. I was in the need of having a camera thus agreed to buy the last piece in the shop. Being an open box, few of the items I believed were missed. I would like to seek your support wherein if you can ship all the missing items to my hometown Canada. Awaiting your response. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to
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let
you know that few of the paper work along with an accessory was missing from the
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box
with respect to my
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purchase
from your
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shop
. On 13th March 2021, I had
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bought
a camera from your electronic
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shop
in Chicago downtown. The
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make
of the camera is of Sony and the model number is VXI232.

I
was disappointed
when I opened the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
box
and found the manual along with the warranty card and HDMI cable was missing. If I could recall
correctly
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shop
had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
one of its kinds available which was an open
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
box
. I was in the need of having a camera
thus
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agreed
to
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buy
the last piece in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shop
. Being an open
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
box
, few of the items I believed
were missed
.

I would like to seek your support wherein if you can ship all the missing items to my hometown Canada.

Awaiting your response.

Yours
faithfully
,

IELTS letter You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it.

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