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You have lost your credit card Write a letter to the manager of your bank In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manger to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request for cancellation of my old credit card and issuing a new card. I would like to inform you that I lost my credit card yesterday. I was coming back to home from work as usual, and came to know that I didn’t have my wallet in my pocket when I got out of the metro. All of my bank cards including the credit card was in my wallet. Moreover, that day the metro was very conjusted and I travelleled in dense crowd. I suspect that my wallet perhaps slipped out of my pocket or someone stole it. Could you please cancel the old credit card due to the possible stealing act? If it is stolen then it would put my bank account details at risk and someone can make unauthorized purchase from the card. Furthermore, I would like to sumbit a request for a replacement of the lost card as I use my credit card for daily transactions. Could you also let me know when will I be able to receive the replacement card? Thank you for your effort and time to take care of this request, and I am looking forward to your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Viraj Gohil
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to request for cancellation of my
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and issuing a new card.

I would like to inform you that I lost my
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yesterday.
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was coming back to home from work as usual, and came to know that I didn’t have my wallet in my pocket when I
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got
out of the metro. All of my bank
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cards
including the
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credit
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card
was in my wallet.

Moreover
, that day the metro was
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conjusted
and I
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travelleled
in dense crowd. I suspect that my wallet perhaps slipped out of my pocket or someone stole it.

Could you
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cancel the
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old
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credit
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due to the possible stealing act? If it
is stolen
then it would put my bank account
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details
at
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risk
and someone can
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make
unauthorized
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purchase
from the
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.
Furthermore
, I would like to
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sumbit
a request for a replacement of the lost
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card
as I
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use
my
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credit
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for daily transactions. Could you
also
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let
me know when will I be able to receive the replacement card?

Thank you for your effort and time to take care of this request, and I am looking forward to your prompt response.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Viraj
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Gohil
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IELTS letter You have lost your credit card Write a letter to the manager of your bank In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manger to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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