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You have a friend living in another country who is curious to know the trending news from your country.Write to him/her.In your letter: • Briefly describe one news story that has been in the media • Explain why people are interested in it. • Also explain why you find it interesting.

You have a friend living in another country who is curious to know the trending news from your country. Write to him/her. In your letter: • Briefly describe one news story that has been in the media • Explain why people are interested in it. • Also explain why you find it interesting. klOe
Dear Peter, I was excited to read from you after a while. Indeed, the pictures you attached to your previous letter made me reminisce about our high school years. Also, you wanted to be updated on headline events in Nigeria and I thought to share one that has been making the rounds of late. Recently, the news has been dominated by the protest against SARS. SARS was created over two decades ago as a special unit of the Nigerian Police Force. They were saddled with the responsibility of combating criminal activities amongst youths in particular. However, they have strayed from their scope of work and now tend to harass, exploit and at times, kill innocent individuals. SARS antics inspired young people to rise-up and demand their immediate termination, hence several protests were organised across the country. The protest brought economic and social activities to a halt and generated lots of news coverage. The demonstration lasted for a month, making it one of the longest in Nigerian history. It was peaceful at first but later escalated into violence, as a result, lives were lost. I was particularly interested in the protest because I also had an unfortunate encounter with a SARS officer. This first-hand experience made me appreciate the just reasons for the protests. The government responded to the demands of the protesters and SARS unit was subsequently abolished. I hope I have been able to bring you up to speed with current events. My regards to your wife. Yours affectionately, Jay
Dear Peter,

I
was excited
to read from you after a while.
Indeed
, the pictures you attached to your previous letter made me reminisce about our high school years.
Also
, you wanted to
be updated
on headline
events
in Nigeria and I
thought
to share one that has been making the rounds of late.

Recently, the news has
been dominated
by the
protest
against SARS. SARS
was created
over two decades ago as a special unit of the Nigerian Police Force. They
were saddled
with the responsibility of combating criminal activities amongst youths
in particular
.
However
, they have strayed from their scope of work and
now
tend to harass, exploit and at times, kill innocent individuals.

SARS antics inspired young
people
to rise-up and demand their immediate termination,
hence
several
protests
were
organised
across the country. The
protest
brought economic and social activities to a halt and generated lots of news coverage. The demonstration lasted for a month, making it one of the longest in Nigerian history. It was peaceful at
first
but
later escalated into violence,
as a result
,
lives
were lost
.

I was
particularly
interested in the
protest
because
I
also
had an unfortunate encounter with a SARS officer. This
first
-hand experience made me appreciate the
just
reasons for the
protests
. The
government
responded to the demands of the protesters and SARS unit was
subsequently
abolished.

I hope I have been able to bring you up to speed with
current
events
. My regards to your wife.

Yours
affectionately
,

Jay
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IELTS letter You have a friend living in another country who is curious to know the trending news from your country. Write to him/her. In your letter: • Briefly describe one news story that has been in the media • Explain why people are interested in it. • Also explain why you find it interesting.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
250 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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