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A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him on next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation.

A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him on next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. ajLm
Dear Ruby, Thank you so much for your invitation. It is really a generous offer to put me up at your place in Turkey. I had really like to come and it's very kind of you but unfortunately I would not be able to make it due to my hectic work schedule. I have just started a new teaching job, and I have been working around the clock. It is been intense! I don't mean to complain, I have been enjoying it immensely and the school l m working at is actually our old High School, which has been a lot of fun. Do you remember Mrs brown? She is actually my supervisor! Could you let me know another time I can visit? Bcause of the school holidays I will be free in the new year and I will also be free in winter so if you are available then, I had certainly love to escape the cold to visit you. I can't wait to hear from you. Your friend, Sam.
Dear Ruby, Thank you
so
much for your invitation. It is
really
a generous offer to put me up at your place in Turkey. I had
really
like to
come
and it's
very
kind of you
but
unfortunately I would not be able to
make
it due to my hectic work schedule. I have
just
started
a new teaching job, and I have been working around the clock. It
is been
intense! I don't mean to complain, I have been enjoying it
immensely
and the school l m working at is actually our
old
High School, which has been
a lot of
fun. Do you remember Mrs brown? She is actually my supervisor! Could you
let
me know another time I can visit?
Bcause
of the school holidays I will be free in the new year and I will
also
be free in winter
so
if you are available then, I had
certainly
love
to escape the
cold
to visit you. I can't wait to hear from you. Your friend, Sam.
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IELTS letter A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him on next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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