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You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it aNAY

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in the hope that you can help me with a problem regarding a camera that I recently bought. On 27 June, I purchased a Canon DSLR camera from the 'Heinemann Duty Free' store at Frankfurt Airport on my way from Moscow to Toronto. The camera cost $799 and I paid for it on my Visa credit card. When I arrived at my hotel in Toronto almost 24 hours later I discovered, to my horror, that the box which contained the camera did not include the battery charger. The space in the box for the charger was empty. I am now in Toronto and I am not returning to Frankfurt, so I need to get the missing parts here. As you are the representative of the company in this country I would be grateful if you could arrange for the parts to be sent to me. I attach a copy of the receipt with this letter for your information. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Ulrich Nielsen

Dear Sir or Madam,

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help
 me with a problem regarding a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 that I recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
.

On 27 June, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 a Canon DSLR You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 from the 'Possible spelling mistake found.Hangman
Heinemann
 Duty Free' store at Frankfurt Airport on my way from Moscow to Toronto. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 cost $799 and I paid for it on my Visa credit card.

When I arrived at my hotel in Toronto almost 24 hours later I discovered, to my horror, that the box which contained the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 did not include the battery charger. The space in the box for the charger was empty.

I am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 in Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Toronto, and
Toronto and
 I am not returning to Frankfurt, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the missing parts here. As you are the representative of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 in this country I would be grateful if you could arrange for the parts to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to me. I attach a copy of the receipt with this letter for your information.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
,

Ulrich Nielsen