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you recently wen to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter, say how you feel about his performance, give details of your musical activities, explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

you recently wen to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter, say how you feel about his performance, give details of your musical activities, explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities 3a5JX
Dear James, My name is Kevin, I recently attended your concert at the global festival in Dubai and wanted to share my feelings about the event. I Highly enjoyed your performance and I strongly believe I was not the only one who was taken away by your performance. The way you engaged the the audience was really commendable. Moreover, your vocal range was amazing and the lyrics of your songs hit the right tone and were relatable with my taste in music. I am also part of a local band mostly consisting of my school friends. We usually play at the local cafe during the weekends and have a practice session once during the week, where we enhance our skills and work on developing new songs. I am the lead guitarist and also the lyricist of the band. I will really appreciate and would be really thankful if you could help our band with your valuable experience and insights. I understand that you compose your own songs, therefore you might be able to assist us in composing some music for our new songs which have been written recently. I hope it is not much to ask of you and look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Kevin
Dear James, My name is Kevin, I recently attended your concert at the global festival in Dubai and wanted to share my feelings about the
event
.

I
Highly
enjoyed your performance and I
strongly
believe I was not the
only
one who
was taken
away by your performance. The way you engaged
the the
audience was
really
commendable.
Moreover
, your vocal range was amazing and the lyrics of your songs hit the right tone and were relatable with my taste in music.

I am
also
part of a local band
mostly
consisting of my school friends. We
usually
play at the local
cafe
during the weekends and have a practice session once during the week, where we enhance our
skills
and work on developing new songs. I am the lead guitarist and
also
the lyricist of the band.

I will
really
appreciate and would be
really
thankful if you could
help
our band with your valuable experience and insights.
I
understand that you compose your
own
songs,
therefore
you might be able to assist us in composing
some
music for our new songs which have
been written
recently.

I
hope it is not much to ask of you and look forward to your reply.

Yours
sincerely
, Kevin
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IELTS letter you recently wen to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter, say how you feel about his performance, give details of your musical activities, explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

Letter
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6 paragraphs
206 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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