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you recently bought a blender .you discovered that it was damaged and some components were missing.say what you bought .describe the problems.suggest what shoud be done.

you recently bought a blender. you discovered that it was damaged and some components were missing. say what you bought. describe the problems. suggest what shoud be done. bEllq

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to express my extreme dissatisfaction about the blender that i bought from your shop. I purchased a blender last Monday 14th May 2021. Before I paid for it, we had tested the blender and it seemed to function well. However, after three days of using, it does not function properly. The main problem is that it had aproblem with electricity. To be honest, i am disappointed with my purchase. I would like to replace the blender with a well-functioning one. I look forward to receiving a reply. Yours faithfully, John Smith

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to express my extreme dissatisfaction about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfood processor
blender
 that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from your shop. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfood processor
blender
 last The date 14th May 2021 is not a Monday, but a Friday.
Monday 14th May 2021
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
 I paid for it, we had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluated
tested
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfood processor
blender
 and it seemed to function well. However
, after three days of using, it does not function properly
. The main problem is that it had Possible spelling mistake found.problema problem
aproblem
 with electricity. To be honest, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
am disappointed
 with my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
. I would like to replace the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfood processor
blender
 with a well-functioning one. I look forward to receiving a reply. Yours faithfully
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