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you recently bought a blender .you discovered that it was damaged and some components were missing.say what you bought .describe the problems.suggest what shoud be done.

you recently bought a blender. you discovered that it was damaged and some components were missing. say what you bought. describe the problems. suggest what shoud be done. bEllq
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to express my extreme dissatisfaction about the blender that i bought from your shop. I purchased a blender last Monday 14th May 2021. Before I paid for it, we had tested the blender and it seemed to function well. However, after three days of using, it does not function properly. The main problem is that it had aproblem with electricity. To be honest, i am disappointed with my purchase. I would like to replace the blender with a well-functioning one. I look forward to receiving a reply. Yours faithfully, John Smith
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to express my extreme dissatisfaction about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
blender
that
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
from your shop. I
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purchased
a
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blender
last
The date 14th May 2021 is not a Monday, but a Friday.
Monday 14th May 2021
.
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Before
I paid for it, we had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tested
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
blender
and it seemed to function well.
However
, after three days of using, it does not function
properly
. The main problem is that it had
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aproblem
with electricity. To be honest,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am disappointed
with my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
. I would like to replace the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
blender
with a well-functioning one. I look forward to receiving a reply. Yours
faithfully
, John
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Smith

IELTS letter you recently bought a blender. you discovered that it was damaged and some components were missing. say what you bought. describe the problems. suggest what shoud be done.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
99 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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