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You have missed an appointment with your close friend. Write a letter (about 80 to 100 words) to tell him/ her the reasons, show your apology and make another meeting next time.

You have missed an appointment with your close friend. Write a letter (about 80 to 100 words) to tell him/ her the reasons, show your apology and make another meeting next time. jdgBN
Dear Peter, How’re you? I’m really good and hope you so. I was glad to receive your plan for an appointment. I agreed to meet you yesterday but I’m too busy for a new project at my company so I can’t make it. This’s a really important work I have to do in this week. After that, I also have a meeting with the manager. I hope you understand. We can hang out the next weekend. I look forward to seeing you soon. Love, Anna.
Dear Peter,

How’re you? I’m
really
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good
and hope you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
. I was glad to receive your plan for an appointment.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agreed
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you yesterday
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I’m too busy for a new project at my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I can’t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it.

This’s a
really
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
work I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
do in this week. After that, I
also
have a meeting with the manager. I hope you understand. We can hang out the
next
weekend.

I look forward to seeing you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Love
,

Anna.
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IELTS letter You have missed an appointment with your close friend. Write a letter (about 80 to 100 words) to tell him/ her the reasons, show your apology and make another meeting next time.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
85 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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