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Request letter for join IETS club

Request letter for join IETS club BM276

Dear Mrs Simpson I am writing to inquire about you IELTS centre. I am first year student at Economical College. I have just discovered that my college does not provide any IELTS clubs as of yet. However, I found your Diamonds IELTS to be the nearest language club and would like to request more information about it. Firstly, I wonder if you could possibly give me a small overview of the available facilities. It would be interesting to know whether the club offers some interactive services and personal training sessions. . Secondly, I would be interested to know how your level is and your pupils are. If you join me in your English course, it will be very greatful. Because, I want to know learning another international language and I am going to open my chances all over the world. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Mohinur

Dear Mrs Simpson

I am writing to inquire about Possible mistake. Please verify.
you IELTS
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centre
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I am first
 year student at Economical College.

I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 discovered that my college does not provide any IELTS clubs as of yet
. However
, I found your Diamonds IELTS to be the nearest language club and would like to request more information about it.

Firstly
, I wonder if you could possibly
 give me a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 overview of the available facilities. It would be interesting to know whether the club offers This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 interactive services and personal training sessions. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.


Secondly
, I would be interested
 to know how your level is and your pupils are. If you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 me in your English course, it will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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greatful
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
, I want to know learning another international Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).language, and
language and
 I am going to open my chances all over the world.

I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours sincerely
,

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