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You recently went to Australia for a holiday. However, your return flight was delayed by a day. Write a letter to the airline company.

You recently went to Australia for a holiday. However, your return flight was delayed by a day. Write a letter to the airline company. q5JmX
Dear Sir /Madam, I am writing with regard no to an unexpected delay in flight I took with your airlines recently. I was initially booked to leave Beijing for Sydney on the 1st of June and return on the 5th of June. The first leg of the journey was uneventful enough. However, on arrival in the boarding lounge at Sydney International Airport, I was informed that my return flight would be delayed by 15 hours and that I would have to spend one night in Brunei on my way back to Taiwan. This caused considerable inconvenience, not only to myself also to my employers, as I was due to commence work again the following day. In fact, it almost cost me my job. Given the fact that this foul-up occurred on such short notice and was entirely the fault of your airline, I feel that compensation in the form of a complimentary ticket of the same distance would be warranted. I can be contacted at the address supplied. A swift response would be greatly appreciated.
Dear Sir /Madam, I am writing with regard
no
to an unexpected delay in flight I took with your airlines recently. I was
initially
booked to
leave
Beijing for Sydney on the 1st of June and return on the 5th of June. The
first
leg of the journey was uneventful
enough
.
However
, on arrival in the boarding lounge at Sydney International Airport, I
was informed
that my return flight would
be delayed
by 15 hours and that I would
have to
spend one night in Brunei on my way back to Taiwan. This caused considerable inconvenience, not
only
to myself
also
to my employers, as I was due to commence work again the following day. In fact, it almost cost me my job.
Given
the fact that this foul-up occurred on such short notice and was
entirely
the fault of your airline, I feel that compensation in the form of a complimentary ticket of the same distance would
be warranted
. I can
be contacted
at the address supplied. A swift response would be
greatly
appreciated.
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IELTS letter You recently went to Australia for a holiday. However, your return flight was delayed by a day. Write a letter to the airline company.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
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