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You have received a bill from the company which supplies the electricity to your house. The bill contains a figure much higher than you expected.

You have received a bill from the company which supplies the electricity to your house. The bill contains a figure much higher than you expected. dqbDd
Dear Sir / Madam, I have recently received a bill dated 02 February from your company in relation to my electricity account 123345. The bill states that for the period of December and January, I have used $350 worth of electricity. This seems to be a mistake since my energy usage typically averages at $45 per month. I am a single female living in a one-bedroom apartment. I rarely use electrical items and many of my large kitchen appliances as well as my water heating run on gas. I would be extremely grateful if you can open a dispute on this bill and instruct one of your team members to investigate. Is it possible that your company has erroneously calculated this figure using an estimated reading? You are welcome to call me on 01442 to discuss this matter. Otherwise, you can simply write back to my address which you have on file. I look forward to a speedy resolution to this matter. Yours faithfully, AK
Dear Sir / Madam,

I have recently received a bill dated 02 February from your
company
in relation to

my electricity account 123345.

The bill states that for the period of December and January, I have
used
$350

worth of electricity. This seems to be a mistake since my energy usage
typically


averages at $45 per month. I am a single female living in a one-bedroom

apartment. I rarely
use
electrical items and
many
of my large kitchen appliances

as well
as my water heating run on gas.

I
would be
extremely
grateful if you can open a dispute on this bill and instruct one

of your team members to investigate. Is it possible that your
company
has

erroneously
calculated this figure using an estimated reading?

You are welcome to call me on 01442 to discuss this matter.
Otherwise
, you can

simply
write back to my address which you have on file.

I look forward to a speedy resolution to this matter.

Yours
faithfully
, AK
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IELTS letter You have received a bill from the company which supplies the electricity to your house. The bill contains a figure much higher than you expected.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
164 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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