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Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter: explain what happened describe the watch ask the manager to help you find it

Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter: explain what happened describe the watch ask the manager to help you find it pLQAL
Dear Sir Or Madam, I am writing this to ask and enquire whether my watch is left behind during my stay at your hotel from 27th June to 5th July. I was staying in room 104 in the aforementioned dates and had a pleasant experience. The staff and services were up to mark. Wrist watch is something essential for me and is imperative part of my dressing. The last time I remember wearing it was in a meeting at my client’s office which was early in the morning on the last day of checkout. I was supposed to leave by 5: 30 pm in the evening but had to rush out due to some emergency at 3: 20 pm on the same day. I may have left it on the dressing table where I usually used to put it. For your convenience, I may mention the watch was of brand Tissot. It had black belt with square dial and my initial engraved “K” at the end of the belt. It just had minute hand in it. Since it was my graduation gift by grandmother it is of paramount importance to me and it has been a lucky charm since then. I therefore request you to please help me find it and coordinate with hose keeping department or lost and found department. Looking forward for your quick response. Regards, Kim.
Dear Sir Or Madam,

I am writing this to ask and
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.
enquire
whether my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
is
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left
behind during my stay at your hotel from 27th June to 5th July. I was staying in room 104 in the aforementioned dates and had a pleasant experience. The staff and services were up to mark.

Wrist
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watch
is something essential for me and is imperative part of my dressing. The last time I remember wearing it was in a meeting at my client’s office which was early in the morning on the last day of checkout. I
was supposed
to
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leave
by 5: 30
This is redundant. Consider using "pm".
pm in the evening
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but
had to rush out due to
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some
emergency at 3: 20 pm on the same day. I may have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
it on the dressing table where I
usually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to put it.

For your convenience, I may mention the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
was of brand Tissot. It had black belt with square dial and my initial engraved “K” at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the belt. It
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
had minute hand in it.

Since it was my graduation gift by grandmother it is of paramount importance to me and it has been a lucky charm since then. I
therefore
request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me find it and coordinate with hose keeping department or lost and found department.

Looking forward for your quick response.

Regards,

Kim.

IELTS letter Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter: explain what happened describe the watch ask the manager to help you find it

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
229 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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