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You have received a letter from a friend who is a chubby girl. She is planning to take her off weight this summer and ask your opinion, advice. Write a letter advising her how to keep fit and healthy.

You have received a letter from a friend who is a chubby girl. She is planning to take her off weight this summer and ask your opinion, advice. Write a letter advising her how to keep fit and healthy. BMREj
Dear Chloe, I’m delighted to receive your letter you and I can tell you some advice as: First of all, the most crucial step in being fit is maintaining a good diet, a balanced diet. To lose weight, you have to make sure that your daily diet creates an energy deficit. Specifically, a diet that ensures you consume more fruits and vegetables and fewer fatty foodstuffs. In addition, you should avoid too much salt during cooking. Cut down on your caffeine and sugar intake. Drinking enough water in a day and use filtered water or fruit juices to replace sort drinks or carbonated drinks. Second of all, I strongly recommend you sleeping early. Sleep plays an important part too. Make sure you get your seven to eight hours of sleep in a day. When you have sleeping well, your body does its natural fat-burning process. Thirdly, do not skip your breakfast ever. It is one of the most important meals of the day. The breakfast provides enough energy to you to start the day. Do not skip meals or let your body get too hungry. It is more likely that you will eat even more at the next meal. In my view, exercise your body every day is necessary. Many activities to choose from like go for a swim, or jog, or ride a bike. A regular workout improves your health. I would suggest that going to a gym helps you be more diligent with your exercise because a gym has the equipment you need for the workout. On the other hand, the trainer will instruct you to exercise. Lastly, I believe that try your best not to get stressed out is essential to losing weight. I hope this piece of advice helps you. Please do not hesitate to contact me should you have any problems. Sincerely, My.
Dear Chloe,

I’m delighted to receive your letter you and I can
tell
you
some
advice as:

First of all
, the most crucial step in
being fit
is maintaining a
good
diet, a balanced diet. To lose weight, you
have to
make
sure that your daily diet creates an energy deficit.
Specifically
, a diet that ensures you consume more fruits and vegetables and fewer fatty foodstuffs.
In addition
, you should avoid too much salt during cooking.
Cut
down on your caffeine and sugar intake. Drinking
enough
water in a day and
use
filtered water or fruit juices to replace sort drinks or carbonated drinks.

Second of all, I
strongly
recommend you sleeping early. Sleep plays an
important
part too.
Make
sure you
get
your seven to eight hours of sleep in a day. When you have sleeping well, your body does its natural
fat
-burning process.

Thirdly
, do not skip your breakfast ever. It is one of the most
important
meals of the day. The breakfast provides
enough
energy to you to
start
the day. Do not skip meals or
let
your body
get
too hungry. It is more likely that you will eat even more at the
next
meal.

In my view, exercise your body every day is necessary.
Many
activities to choose from like go for a swim, or jog, or ride a bike. A regular workout
improves
your health. I would suggest that going to a gym
helps
you be more diligent with your exercise
because
a gym has the equipment you need for the workout.
On the other hand
, the trainer will instruct you to exercise.

Lastly
, I believe that try your best not to
get
stressed
out is essential to losing weight.

I hope this piece of advice
helps
you.
Please
do not hesitate to contact me should you have any problems.

Sincerely
,

My.
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IELTS letter You have received a letter from a friend who is a chubby girl. She is planning to take her off weight this summer and ask your opinion, advice. Write a letter advising her how to keep fit and healthy.

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  American English
10 paragraphs
308 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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