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You have been invited to a networking conference for your field of work. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter: Describe the invitation you received and why it is important to you Explain why the conference would be beneficial for you and the company Ask for the company for time off to attend and to cover some of the travel costs.

You have been invited to a networking conference for your field of work. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter: Describe the invitation you received and why it is important to you Explain why the conference would be beneficial for you and the company Ask for the company for time off to attend and to cover some of the travel costs. 7wDY
Dear Mr. Powell, The purpose of the letter is to draw your immediate attention towards allowing me absence from work for five days. I am attending a seminar on marketing conducted by the leading people of the industry, Not only it gonna enhance my horizon in business but also going to be a essential skill acquired in long run, More over have been looking forward to be there since the beginning of the year. Although its going to be a very fruit full event for me, But I think i can apply these acquired set of skills to my work, Being the customer relation manager I deal with around 400 clients of our company it will provide me supreme confidence to deal with our business partners in better way, other than that it can help with acquiring new business. I will be an asset to this company. kindly allow me to be absent from work from 14th feb to 19th feb. I also request you to kindly help me with some of my expenses mainly Food, Accommodation and Transportation bill from hotel to airport and vice versa, I suggest to book the hotel near the venue of the seminar. I await a favorable response from you. Thanking you for your consideration. Yours faithfully
Dear Mr. Powell,

The purpose of the letter is to draw your immediate attention towards allowing me absence from work for five days. I am attending a seminar on marketing conducted by the leading
people
of the industry, Not
only
it
gonna
enhance my horizon in business
but
also
going to be
a
essential
skill
acquired in long run, More over have been looking forward
to be
there since the beginning of the year. Although
its
going to be a
very
fruit full
event
for me,
But
I
think
i
can apply these acquired set of
skills
to my work, Being the customer relation manager I deal with around 400 clients of our
company
it will provide me supreme confidence to deal with our business partners in better way, other than that it can
help
with acquiring new business. I will be an asset to this
company
.

kindly
allow
me to be absent from work from 14th
feb
to 19th
feb
. I
also
request you to kindly
help
me with
some
of my expenses
mainly
Food, Accommodation and Transportation bill from hotel to airport and vice versa, I
suggest to book
the hotel near the venue of the seminar. I await a favorable response from you. Thanking you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
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IELTS letter You have been invited to a networking conference for your field of work. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter: Describe the invitation you received and why it is important to you Explain why the conference would be beneficial for you and the company Ask for the company for time off to attend and to cover some of the travel costs.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
212 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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