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Write a letter to principal of your child's school to allow your child attend school for the next year as you missed to register them

Write a letter to principal of your child's school to allow your child attend school for the next year as you missed to register them Nb72

Good Morning Mr. Freeman, I hope you are doing well. I am writing this email to request you to allow Sarah to be enrolled for Second Grade at Idea Round Rock Public School as we missed to get her reregister for the next year. Sarah is doing well with her studies and she loves all her teachers. We are happy with the curriculum and want Sarah to stay at the right place and excel in her studies and learning. The reason we missed her to be reregistered is, that we were not sure that we were going to stay in Round Rock for the coming year. As things have changed, we want to continue her schooling at Idea school. Also, we want to send her in person to the school, starting next year. I hope you will consider the request and ensure her a seat for the upcoming annum. Regards, Susan

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Good
 Morning Mr. Freeman,

I hope you are doing well.

I am writing this email to request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 Sarah to be enrolled
 for Second Grade at This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
Idea
 Round Rock Public School as we missed to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 her Possible spelling mistake found.preregister
reregister
 for the next
 year.

Sarah is doing well with her Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).studies, and
studies and
 she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiresadores
loves
 all her teachers. We are happy with the curriculum and want Sarah to stay at the right place and excel in her studies and learning.

The reason we missed her to be Possible spelling mistake found.preregistered
reregistered
 is, that we were not sure that we were going to stay in Round Rock for the coming year. As things have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
, we want to continue her schooling at This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
Idea
 school. Also
, we want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 her in person to the school, starting next
 year.

I hope you will consider the request and ensure her a seat for the upcoming Possible spelling mistake found.annulAnnam
annum
.

Regards,

Susan

IELTS letter Write a letter to principal of your child's school to allow your child attend school for the next year as you missed to register them

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

150 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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