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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, say where you think you left the papers explain why they are so important tell the manager what you want him/her to do

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, say where you think you left the papers explain why they are so important tell the manager what you want him/her to do Q0wL
I have recently attended a business conference at your hotel 'Paradise', and regrettably misplaced some important documents in the room I stayed in. I am hoping you would be kind enough to notify me once you have those documents. I stayed in your hotel from 24th to 25th October in room 524. And I attended a conference at the Business Meeting Hall on 24th October. I departed the next day and just after I reached Manchester, I noticed that I have left those documents unattended in my hotel room, perhaps inside the drawer that was placed beside my bed. All of those documents are placed inside a blue folder with my name written on top of it. In particular, these documents are extremely important to me. They contain some confidential financial information about my company, a presentation and some notes that I took during the conference. Without those documents, I would be in great trouble. I need to submit a few of these papers to my company before the end of this month. I would request you to ask your staff to conduct a thorough search in the room and then hold this folder in your possession. Please give me a call on 7826434896 once you have it. I will arrange someone to collect it for me. Thank you in advance for your kind help. Yours faithfully, Rinkesh Soni
I have recently attended a business conference at your hotel 'Paradise', and
regrettably
misplaced
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some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
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documents
in the
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room
I stayed in. I am hoping you would be kind
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enough
to notify me once you have those documents.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
stayed in your hotel from 24th to 25th October in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
524. And I attended a conference at the Business Meeting Hall on 24th October. I departed the
next
day and
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just
after I reached Manchester, I noticed that I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
those
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
documents
unattended in my hotel
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
, perhaps inside the drawer that
was placed
beside my bed. All of those
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
documents
are placed
inside a blue folder with my name written on top of it.

In particular
, these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
documents
are
extremely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to me. They contain
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
confidential financial information about my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, a presentation and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
notes that I took during the conference. Without those
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
documents
, I would be in great trouble. I need to submit a few of these papers to my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of this month.

I would request you to ask your staff to conduct a thorough search in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
and then hold this folder in your possession.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
give me a call on 7826434896 once you have it. I will arrange someone to collect it for me.

Thank you in advance for your kind
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.

Yours
faithfully
,
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Rinkesh
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Soni

IELTS letter You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, say where you think you left the papers explain why they are so important tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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6 paragraphs
228 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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