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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, say where you think you left the papers explain why they are so important tell the manager what you want him/her to do

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, say where you think you left the papers explain why they are so important tell the manager what you want him/her to do Q0wL

I have recently attended a business conference at your hotel 'Paradise', and regrettably misplaced some important documents in the room I stayed in. I am hoping you would be kind enough to notify me once you have those documents. I stayed in your hotel from 24th to 25th October in room 524. And I attended a conference at the Business Meeting Hall on 24th October. I departed the next day and just after I reached Manchester, I noticed that I have left those documents unattended in my hotel room, perhaps inside the drawer that was placed beside my bed. All of those documents are placed inside a blue folder with my name written on top of it. In particular, these documents are extremely important to me. They contain some confidential financial information about my company, a presentation and some notes that I took during the conference. Without those documents, I would be in great trouble. I need to submit a few of these papers to my company before the end of this month. I would request you to ask your staff to conduct a thorough search in the room and then hold this folder in your possession. Please give me a call on 7826434896 once you have it. I will arrange someone to collect it for me. Thank you in advance for your kind help. Yours faithfully, Rinkesh Soni

I have recently attended a business conference at your hotel 'Paradise', and regrettably
 misplaced This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withformcertificatescriptevidencerecordpaper
documents
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 I stayed in. I am hoping you would be kind This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 to notify me once you have those documents.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 stayed in your hotel from 24th to 25th October in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 524. And I attended a conference at the Business Meeting Hall on 24th October. I departed the next
 day and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 after I reached Manchester, I noticed that I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withformcertificatescriptevidencerecordpaper
documents
 unattended in my hotel You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
, perhaps inside the drawer that was placed
 beside my bed. All of those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withformcertificatescriptevidencerecordpaper
documents
are placed
 inside a blue folder with my name written on top of it.

In particular
, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withformcertificatescriptevidencerecordpaper
documents
 are extremely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to me. They contain This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 confidential financial information about my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
, a presentation and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 notes that I took during the conference. Without those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withformcertificatescriptevidencerecordpaper
documents
, I would be in great trouble. I need to submit a few of these papers to my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of this month.

I would request you to ask your staff to conduct a thorough search in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 and then hold this folder in your possession. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 give me a call on 7826434896 once you have it. I will arrange someone to collect it for me.

Thank you in advance for your kind This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
.

Yours faithfully
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