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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course Ok6N
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in the “Web development” course offered at your institute starting next month. While it is for those having elementary knowledge, I am incomparably interested in designing websites since my childhood. Let me give you more details about myself. Although I am studying Business management, I am far interested in interacting with the world through the internet. I always watch tutorials on YouTube about creating dynamic websites for business purposes, such as the WordPress framework. However, I want to enroll in a formal course to learn the theory behind coding and enhance my skills. My joys found no limits when I read the syllabus, and I thought it is a golden opportunity for me to intensify my skills. Can you please make an exception for me to enroll in the program and be the primary beneficiary? I will be thankful for this act of kindness. Please reply to me at your earliest possible convenience so that I can make enrollment arrangements. Thank you very much for your time and consideration. Your obedient, Jay khan
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in the “Web development” course offered at your institute starting
next
month. While it is for those having elementary knowledge, I am
incomparably
interested in designing websites since my childhood.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me give you more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
about myself. Although I am studying Business management, I am far interested in interacting with the world through the internet. I always
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
tutorials on YouTube about creating dynamic websites for business purposes, such as the WordPress framework.
However
, I want to enroll in a formal course to learn the theory behind coding and enhance my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.

My joys found no limits when I read the syllabus, and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
it is a golden opportunity for me to intensify my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. Can you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
an exception for me to enroll in the program and be the primary beneficiary?

I will be thankful for this act of kindness.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
reply to me at your earliest possible convenience
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
enrollment arrangements.

Thank you
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very
much for your time and consideration.

Did you mean "you're"?
Your
obedient,

Jay khan

IELTS letter Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

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