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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. yV7l
Dear John, I hope you are in the best of health and in high spirits. I am Garry, the person you brought to the hospital after an accident on Bank street. I am blessed to meet such a nice person and impressed immensely by you, and so I am writing to express my gratitude. I believe you were an angel sent for me to bring me to the hospital in time. Otherwise, I would have lost much blood and possibly could die. I do not remember after I was hit from the back by another car while riding my bike. When I opened my eyes, I found myself in the hospital with you standing beside me. I came to know from doctors and nurses that your first aid helped me stop bleeding from my leg. I am so thankful to you and can never pay you back in any shape. My wife and I decided to invite you and your family to dinner next week. Please let me know about your schedule so that I can plan accordingly. I hope you will have a wonderful time with us, and my son is waiting eagerly to meet you. Once again, I am thankful to you for this act of kindness. Yours sincerely, XYZ
Dear John,

I hope you are in the best of health and in high spirits. I am Garry, the person you brought to the hospital after an accident on Bank street.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am blessed
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
such a nice person and impressed
immensely
by you, and
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so
I am writing to express my gratitude.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
believe you were an angel
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
for me to bring me to the hospital in time.
Otherwise
, I would have lost much blood and
possibly
could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
die
. I do not remember after I
was hit
from the back by another car while riding my bike. When I opened my eyes, I found myself in the hospital with you standing beside me. I came to know from doctors and nurses that your
first
aid
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
bleeding from my leg.

I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
thankful to you and can never pay you back in any shape. My wife and I decided to invite you and your family to dinner
next
week.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know about your schedule
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can plan
accordingly
. I hope you will have a wonderful time with us, and my son is waiting
eagerly
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you.

Once again, I am thankful to you for this act of kindness.

Yours
sincerely
,

XYZ

IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

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  American English
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211 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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