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A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food YNRK
Dear Jay, I hope you are in the best of health and in high spirits. It’s been a year since we met. I’m glad to get your invitation to visit South Korea. I’ve never been there, and so I’m writing to ask you for more details about the trip. Firstly, please let me know about the preference of your culture for a gift. I don’t know much about Korean culture, so I want to hear from you what kind of presents you guys like the most? Secondly, I’m to enquire about the weather, being a Canadian I’m used to cold weather, but I have a paucity of knowledge about Korean, so let me know if need to pack my warm clothes also? Moreover, I googled about the ongoing activities and found that Itaewon is the favourite place of foreigners for festivals and stuff is that true? Lastly, as you know, I am fond of food and love to taste different dishes. Please confirm if I can try Indian Chicken biryani and Nihari there? I can’t wait to see you. Your friend, Smith
Dear Jay,

I hope you are in the best of health and in high spirits.

It’s been a year since we met. I’m glad to
get
your invitation to visit South Korea. I’ve never been there, and
so
I’m writing to ask you for more
details
about the trip.

Firstly
,
please
let
me
know
about the preference of your culture for a gift. I don’t
know
much about Korean culture,
so
I want to hear from you what kind of presents you guys like the most?

Secondly
, I’m to
enquire
about the weather, being a Canadian I’m
used
to
cold
weather,
but
I have a paucity of knowledge about Korean,
so
let
me
know
if need to pack my warm clothes
also
?
Moreover
, I googled about the ongoing activities and found that
Itaewon
is the
favourite
place of foreigners for festivals and stuff is that true?

Lastly
, as you
know
, I am fond of food and
love
to taste
different
dishes.
Please
confirm if I can try Indian Chicken biryani and
Nihari
there?

I can’t wait to
see
you.

Your friend,

Smith
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IELTS letter A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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