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TASK 1 You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take

TASK 1 You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take DpVA
Dear sir, I have immensely enjoyed and benefitted from the course you have taken me these past few months. However, I will not be able to continue with the part-time programme due to the reason explained below. As you are aware, I am a full-time employee at a telecommunication company, Hence my work hours are between 9 am to 5 pm every weekday and occasionally on weekends. Regardless of this, I try to balance my work activities and study curriculum thus far. Recently, I have been saddled with the responsibility of supervising a project in another state, thus requiring me to permanently relocate to the area for the duration of the task. As a result of this, I would like to defer my course to the subsequent semester, by then, the project would have been completed and I would be available to attend evening classes once again. I look forward to your favourable revert. Yours faithfullyJubril
Dear sir, I have
immensely
enjoyed and
benefitted
from the course you have taken me these past few months.
However
, I will not be able to continue with the part-time
programme
due to the reason
explained
below. As you are aware, I am a full-time employee at a telecommunication
company
,
Hence
my work hours are between 9 am to 5 pm every weekday and
occasionally
on weekends. Regardless of this, I try to balance my work activities and study curriculum
thus
far. Recently, I have
been saddled
with the responsibility of supervising a project in another state,
thus
requiring me to
permanently
relocate to the area for the duration of the task.
As a result
of this, I would like to defer my course to the subsequent semester, by then, the project would have
been completed
and I would be available to attend evening classes once again. I look forward to your
favourable
revert. Yours
faithfullyJubril
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IELTS letter TASK 1 You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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