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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: • explain what you are currently doing • describe your suitability for this area of work • say when you can attend an interview

A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: • explain what you are currently doing • describe your suitability for this area of work • say when you can attend an interview n217
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in connection with the vacancy for waiters at your restaurant “Nemko” as advertised in Geo newspaper today. Let me tell you about myself. I am currently working as a waiter in Madinah restaurant at Manglor, Swat. I have been working here for the last two years and gain sufficient experience to move up the position. Besides, my current place is a little far from home, and I have to travel for two hours daily to come to the restaurant and go back home. Therefore, I want to avail myself of this opportunity and be the primary beneficiary of the job at hand. I have the relevant experience and skills required, as mentioned in the job description. I enclosed my resume with this letter. Please let me know about a suitable time in your schedule for an interview. I am available any time this week and next. I will be glad to hear from you at your earliest convenience. Yours truly, Ikram Hussain
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in connection with the vacancy for waiters at your restaurant “
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Nemko
” as advertised in Geo newspaper
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today
.

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Let
me
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tell
you about myself. I am
currently
working as a waiter in
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Madinah
restaurant at
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Manglor
, Swat. I have been working here for the last two years and gain sufficient experience to
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move
up the position.

Besides
, my
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current
place is a
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little
far from home, and I
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have to
travel for two hours daily to
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come
to the restaurant and go back home.
Therefore
, I want to avail myself of this opportunity and be the primary beneficiary of the job at hand. I have the relevant experience and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
required, as mentioned in the job description.

I enclosed my resume with this letter.
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Please
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let
me know about a suitable time in your schedule for an interview. I am available any time this week and
next
.

I will be glad to hear from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours
truly
,

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Ikram
Hussain

IELTS letter A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: • explain what you are currently doing • describe your suitability for this area of work • say when you can attend an interview

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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