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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter Say where you think you left the papers Explain why they are so important Tell the manager what you want him/her to do

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter Say where you think you left the papers Explain why they are so important Tell the manager what you want him/her to do PoKX
Dear manager, I am writing this letter to bring your notice that yesterday I had a meeting in your hotel lobby area and When I returned back to my home, suddenly I realized that I left some of my very important paper there. Here is some information that you need to know. Firstly, I attended my meeting with two of my office colleagues on table number 6 in your lobby area, moreover, we were there for approximately 3 hours. The papers were in a blue color file, in addition, it should be there in your hotel. Secondly, those papers are very important to me because there is some confidential information is mentioned about the company. However, if it will be lost may be, I will also lose my job as well. Thirdly and most importantly, kindly ask your all staff about it and if you find those papers please call me back on my phone number which I am mentioning at the end of this letter. I will come back and take it. I am hoping for a positive response as soon as possible from you. Yours faithfully, Nidhi rai.
Dear manager,

I am writing this letter to bring your notice that yesterday I had a meeting in your hotel lobby area and When I
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returned back
to my home,
suddenly
I realized that I
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left
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some
of my
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important
paper there. Here is
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some
information that you need to know.

Firstly
, I attended my meeting with two of my office colleagues on table number 6 in your lobby area,
moreover
, we were there for approximately 3 hours. The papers were in a blue color file,
in addition
, it should be there in your hotel.

Secondly
, those papers are
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very
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important
to me
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because
there is
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some
confidential information is
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mentioned about the
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company
.
However
, if it will
be lost
may be, I will
also
lose my job
as well
.

Thirdly
and most
importantly
, kindly ask your all staff about it and if you find those papers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
call me back on my phone number which I am mentioning at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of this letter. I will
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come
back and take it.

I am hoping for a
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positive
response as
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soon
as possible from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Nidhi
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rai
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IELTS letter You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter Say where you think you left the papers Explain why they are so important Tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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  American English
8 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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