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on a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost

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Dear Sir/MadamI am writing this letter to inform you that I recently lost my laptop while on holiday in ShimlaThe Laptop was a black color with brand of Apple. It has a great feature, I bought this new laptop in last month and this cost $1500. It was covered with pink base cover with my name on it. I lost it when me and my husband having a coffee in coffee shop. This coffee shop is situated in Downtown. we spent 40 minutes in this coffee shop when I noticed it was missing. I am entitled to make a claim for the value of the above mentioned details and request you send me details on what I need to do it order to proceed. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours FaithfullyKomalpreet
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writing this letter to inform you that I recently lost my laptop while on holiday in
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ShimlaThe
Laptop was a black color with brand of Apple. It has a great feature, I
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bought
this new laptop in last month and this cost $1500. It
was covered
with pink base cover with my name on it. I lost it when me and my husband having a
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coffee
in
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coffee
shop. This
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coffee
shop
is situated
in Downtown.
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we
spent 40 minutes in this
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coffee
shop when I noticed it was missing. I
am entitled
to
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make
a claim for the value of the above mentioned
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details
and request you
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send
me
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details
on what I need to do it order
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to proceed
. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours
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FaithfullyKomalpreet

IELTS letter on a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost

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  American English
1 paragraphs
136 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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