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on a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost

on a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost g3m3

Dear Sir/MadamI am writing this letter to inform you that I recently lost my laptop while on holiday in ShimlaThe Laptop was a black color with brand of Apple. It has a great feature, I bought this new laptop in last month and this cost $1500. It was covered with pink base cover with my name on it. I lost it when me and my husband having a coffee in coffee shop. This coffee shop is situated in Downtown. we spent 40 minutes in this coffee shop when I noticed it was missing. I am entitled to make a claim for the value of the above mentioned details and request you send me details on what I need to do it order to proceed. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours FaithfullyKomalpreet

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