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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. v.3

You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. v. 3 8eOP

DEAR MA'AM I AM WRITING TO LET YOU KNOW THAT I HAVE READ YOUR ADVERTISEMENT IN AUSTRALIAN MAGAZINE AND I WANT TO INQUIRE IF STILL AVAILABLE, IM ROAN LIAO 30 YEARS OLD AND CURRENTLY EMPLOYED AS A CAREGIVER, BUT IT WILL END MY CONTRACT NEXT MONTH. I AM PSYCHOLOGY GRADUATE AND CERTIFIED CAREGIVER AND FIRST AIDER, MY JOB PRESENTLY IS THE SAME WITH YOUR JOB OFFER, I AM ALMOST A DECADE WORKING IN THIS LINE OF JOB, I DO COOKING, CLEANING, AND DRIVING THE CHILDREN TO SCHOOL AND I ALSO THEIR TUTOR, SO IF YOU HIRE ME I WILL ASSURE YOU THAT YOU WILL NOT GOING TO REGRET IT. I WILL GOING TO LOVE YOUR CHILD AS MY OWN EVEN THOUGH ITS A SHORT PERIOD OF TIME. IF YOU NEED MORE INFORMATION MY NUMBER AND EMAIL ADD ENCLOSE TO THIS LETTER. I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU. RESPECTFULLY YOURS, ROAN LIAO

DEAR MA'Possible grammar error. Make sure that 'AM I AM WRITING' is correct.
AM
I AM WRITING
 TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
LET
 YOU KNOW THAT I HAVE READ YOUR ADVERTISEMENT IN AUSTRALIAN MAGAZINE AND I WANT TO INQUIRE IF STILL
 AVAILABLE, Make sure that 'IM' is an abbreviation (instant message, individual medley, infectious mononucleosis). Did you mean "I'm" or "I am"?I'mI am
IM
 ROAN Possible spelling mistake found.LaoLiarLimoLidoLIFOCiao
LIAO
 30 YEARS This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
OLD
 AND CURRENTLY
 EMPLOYED AS A CAREGIVER, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
BUT
 IT WILL This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
END
 MY CONTRACT NEXT
 MONTH.

I AM PSYCHOLOGY GRADUATE AND CERTIFIED CAREGIVER AND FIRST
 AIDER, MY JOB PRESENTLY
 IS THE SAME WITH YOUR JOB OFFER, I AM ALMOST A DECADE WORKING IN THIS LINE OF JOB, I The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "go COOKING".Go COOKING
DO COOKING
, CLEANING, AND DRIVING THE CHILDREN TO SCHOOL AND I ALSO
 THEIR TUTOR, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
SO
 IF YOU HIRE ME I WILL ASSURE YOU THAT YOU WILL NOT The verb 'WILL' requires the base form of the verb: "go"Go
GOING
 TO REGRET IT. I WILL The verb 'WILL' requires the base form of the verb: "go"Go
GOING
 TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
LOVE
 YOUR CHILD AS MY This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
OWN
EVEN THOUGH
Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?It'sIt is
ITS
 A SHORT PERIOD OF TIME. IF YOU NEED MORE INFORMATION MY NUMBER AND EMAIL This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
ADD
 ENCLOSE TO THIS LETTER.

I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU.

RESPECTFULLY
 YOURS, ROAN Possible spelling mistake found.LaoLiarLimoLidoLIFOCiao
LIAO