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A friend has written to you asking for advice about the problem at work you have had a similar problem in the past. tell your friend you understand the problem explain what happened to you in the past suggest possible solution to the problem

A friend has written to you asking for advice about the problem at work you have had a similar problem in the past. tell your friend you understand the problem explain what happened to you in the past suggest possible solution to the problem 5eOD

Dear Ahmad, how do you do? I have heard about your problem and I am afraid that you want to change your job. It has happened for me in the past but I have rescued my job. I understand very well about you're feeling in this issue. you have to know colleagues' financial misuse are integral part of lives. However, your case is slightly harder than me because it happend through your manager and it can be difficult to say your boss about it. As you know, I faced a similar problem 5 years ago when I checked the financial account in the company. I mediately decided to say it to my manager as well as writing my resign while I was threatened via my colleagues and I was forced to decided to say this matter or not. Undoubtedly, choosing what to do is severely hard and may be impossible. However, I threw my heart into the sea and choose the right way. I therefore suggest you to speak your boss without any frightened and embarrassing. If you believe may be at risk, you can resign; then, send the email to the concerned person and disclose financial issues. I am looking forward to hearing about your decision and I'm hoping that my suggestion will prove helpful. Moreover, I am always here if you need me. You can account on me and come here any time. all the best wishes

Dear Ahmad,

how do you do? I have heard about your Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).problem, and
problem and
 I am afraid that you want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 your job. It has happened for me in the past This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I have rescued my job.

I understand This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well about you're feeling in this issue. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYou
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 know colleagues' financial misuse are integral part of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
. However
, your case is slightly
 harder than me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it Possible spelling mistake found.happenedhappenhappensappendh appendhap pend
happend
 through your manager and it can be difficult to say your boss about it.

As you know, I faced a similar problem 5 years ago when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 the financial account in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. I Possible spelling mistake found.immediatelymediatedmediatemediatesmediallysedately
mediately
 decided to say it to my manager as well
 as writing my The word 'resign' is not a noun. Did you mean "resignation"?resignation
resign
 while I was threatened
 via my Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).colleagues, and
colleagues and
 I was forced
 to Did you mean "decide"?decide
decided
 to say this matter or not.

Undoubtedly
, choosing what to do is severely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 and may be impossible. However
, I threw my heart into the sea and choose the right way. I therefore
 suggest you to speak your boss without any frightened and embarrassing. If you believe may be at This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
, you can resign; then, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 the email to the concerned person and disclose financial issues.

I am looking forward to hearing about your decision and I'm hoping that my suggestion will prove helpful. Moreover
, I am always here if you need me. You can account on me and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 here any time.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAll
all
 the best wishes