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You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.

You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . , Nxxd
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Pooja and currently pursuing my master's in Event Management and Planning. I have already registered for the month long training program that is going to be held in London. I am writing this letter to let you know that I am interested to be the social event's organiser. I would like to know more about the steps required for being the coordinator, and also it will be helpful for me to know the schedule in detail, so that I can prepare myself to do whatever is needed of me. As I am doing my master's in the same field of event planning, I have been lucky to get an opportunity previously as well to work as an organiser. My experience will definitely add value to this event, if you are kind enough to give me the responsibility of the social event's organiser. I will be grateful if I get this opportunity to handle the event. Yours faithfully Pooja
Dear Sir/Madam, I am
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Pooja
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currently
pursuing my master's in
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Event
Management and Planning. I have already registered for the month long training program
that is
going to
be held
in London. I am writing this letter to
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let
you know that I
am interested
to be the social
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event
's
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organiser
.
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I
would like to know more about the steps required for being the coordinator, and
also
it will be helpful for me to know the schedule in detail,
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so
that I can prepare myself to do whatever
is needed
of me. As I am doing my master's in the same field of
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event
planning, I have been lucky to
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get
an opportunity previously
as well
to work as an
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organiser
. My experience will definitely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
value to this
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event
, if you are kind
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enough
to give me the responsibility of the social
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event
's
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organiser
. I will be grateful if I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
this opportunity to handle the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
. Yours
faithfully
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Pooja
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IELTS letter You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . ,

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5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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