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you are moving for a new city and are looking for a place to live there write a letter to a friend who lives in that city. In your letter, explain why you are moving'describe the kind of place you would like to live in ask your friend for advice about finding a place to live

you are moving for a new city and are looking for a place to live there write a letter to a friend who lives in that city. In your letter, explain why you are moving'describe the kind of place you would like to live in ask your friend for advice about finding a place to live Qog3
Hi Ruby, please check the letter You are moving for a new city and are looking for a place to live there write a letter to a friend who lives in that city. In your letter, explain why you are moving'describe the kind of place you would like to live in ask your friend for advice about finding a place to live Dear ruby, Hello, I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing this letter in request to help me to find a place to live in your city. Recently, I applied for a position of software developer and after all the formalities they informed me the location. I am suprised and happy that I am moving to your city for joining in the company. Looking for a place which has nice surroundings and most probably near to my office and mainly in the quite neighbourhood. I am looking for a double bedroom flat where it will be comfortable for my parents when they come to visit me and it is great if the place is near to you. so that, we can hangout more Can you please advice me how to search for a house to rent or refer me to realestate agencies which you already know or if you know any place, provide me the contact details I will get in touch with them. Thanks for your help in advance Hope to see you soon. Your friend, Chanakya
Hi Ruby,

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write a letter to a friend who
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why you are moving'
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the kind of
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you would like to
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in

ask your friend for advice about finding a
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to
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Dear ruby,

Hello, I hope this letter finds you in
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health. I am writing this letter in request to
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help me to find
a
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place
to
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in your city.

Recently, I applied for a position of software developer and
after all
the formalities they informed me the location. I am
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suprised
and happy that I am moving to your city for joining in the
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company
.

Looking for a
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place
which has nice surroundings and most
probably
near to my office and
mainly
in the quite
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neighbourhood
. I am looking for a double bedroom flat where it will be comfortable for my parents when they
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to visit me and it is great if the
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place
is near to you.
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so
that, we
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can hangout
more

Can you
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advice me how to search for a
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house
to rent or refer me to
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realestate
agencies which you already know or if you know any
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place
, provide me the contact
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details
I will
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get
in touch with them.

Thanks for your
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in advance

Hope to
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you
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.

Your friend,

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Chanakya
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IELTS letter you are moving for a new city and are looking for a place to live there write a letter to a friend who lives in that city. In your letter, explain why you are moving'describe the kind of place you would like to live in ask your friend for advice about finding a place to live

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
243 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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