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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. - Say where you think you left the papers - Explain why they are so important - Tell the manager what you want him/ her to do

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. - Say where you think you left the papers - Explain why they are so important - Tell the manager what you want him/ her to do 7kgY

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to you regarding the important papers I have left in your hotel. I attended a board meeting last Wednesday at “King Fu” hotel and after I returned home, I found out that I have left my important files there. I think I have left the papers under where I sit in the meeting room, I think the seat number was row 13 and number 8. Please assist me in finding the papers in the meeting room, especially around row 10 to row 15. The papers are inside of a yellow envelope, and the envelope is glued. The papers is really important to me because it contains some sensitive internal information that should not be exposed to anyone outside of our company. It will cause a huge issue to us if the information is exposed to our competitors. I have been informed that the hotel cleans the meeting room after each meeting, so please ask the cleaners if they have seen the envelope. Please also check the CCTV to see if anyone had mistaken it by any chance. We will provide rewards if we can find the envelope. Looking forward to hearing back from you. Yours Sincerely, Annabel

Dear Sir or Madam,

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important
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left
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left
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 files there.

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think
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left
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think
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 assist me in finding the papers in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshowdowncontestconventioncompetitionsessiontalk
meeting
 room, especially
 around row 10 to row 15. The papers are This phrase is redundant. Consider using "inside".inside
inside of
 a yellow envelope, and the envelope is glued
. The papers You should probably use: "are".are
is
really
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important
 to me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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some
 sensitive internal information that should not be exposed
 to anyone This phrase is redundant. Consider using "outside".outside
outside of
 our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. It will cause a huge issue to us if the information is exposed
 to our competitors.

I have been informed
 that the hotel cleans the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshowdowncontestconventioncompetitionsessiontalk
meeting
 room after each You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshowdowncontestconventioncompetitionsessiontalk
meeting
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 ask the cleaners if they have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 the envelope. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 the CCTV to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 if anyone had mistaken it by any chance. We will provide rewards if we can find the envelope.

Looking forward to hearing back from you.

Yours Sincerely
,

Annabel