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There are plans to build a new factory in parkland near where you live. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter give reasons why you are against the plans explain why the parkland should stay suggest what action the council should take

There are plans to build a new factory in parkland near where you live. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter give reasons why you are against the plans explain why the parkland should stay suggest what action the council should take MDGQ

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my concern about the possible approval of plans to build a factory on currently undeveloped parkland in my suburb. Many residents are worried about the consequences of allowing this factory to be built. At present the area is predominantly residential with no industrial operations at all. In addition to pollution from the factory, the extra traffic would bring noise and parking issues, and also introduce a hazard for the many children who live in the area. After discussion with other residents, I would like to propose that the parkland be developed by construction of a children’s play area and installation of seating and barbeque areas. I am sure this would represent a far better solution for our community. I would like to suggest that you now call an urgent meeting of residents to discuss the application for the factory construction and to hear resident suggestions for alternative development of the area. I look forward to your response on this matter. Yours faithfully, Naomi Brown

Dear Sir or Madam,

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factory
 on currently
 undeveloped parkland in my suburb.

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residents
are worried
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factory
 to be built
. At present the area is predominantly
 residential with no industrial operations at all. In addition
 to pollution from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopfirmcooperativeindustryworkshopbranch
factory
, the extra traffic would bring noise and parking issues, and also
 introduce a hazard for the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 children who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in the area.

After discussion with other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdwellerinmatecitizeninhabitantlocaltenant
residents
, I would like to propose that the parkland be developed
 by construction of a children’s play area and installation of seating and Possible spelling mistake found.barbecue
barbeque
 areas. I am sure this would represent a far better solution for our community.

I would like to suggest that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 call an urgent meeting of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdwellerinmatecitizeninhabitantlocaltenant
residents
 to discuss the application for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopfirmcooperativeindustryworkshopbranch
factory
 construction and to hear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdwellerinmatecitizeninhabitantlocaltenant
resident
 suggestions for alternative development of the area.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to your response on this matter.

Yours faithfully
,

Naomi Brown