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You have been facing a lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter: • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work/office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems

You have been facing a lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter: • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work/office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems 5Y8p

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to the work environment in our office premises. I have been trasferred here from Hyderabad last week only. I was very excited to join my new workplace and meet new colleagues here in north India. But I have been facing a lot of discrimation by my fellow colleagues. We all come from diverse cultures and regions of India, and we should respect all people irrespective of their caste, creed or region. Furthermore, project is all about team spirit and we must all work together deligently fulfil the client's requirements. I would request you to please help me in the above mentioned scenario by conducting some introduction session for the new joinees. Hope to Yours faithfully John Mathew

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to the work environment in our office premises.

I have been Possible spelling mistake found.transferred
trasferred
 here from Hyderabad last week This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 excited to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 my new workplace and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 new colleagues here in north India. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I have been facing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
Possible spelling mistake found.discrimination
discrimation
 by my Consider using "colleagues".colleagues
fellow colleagues
.

We all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 from diverse cultures and regions of India, and we should respect all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 irrespective of their caste, creed or region. Furthermore
, project is all about team Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).spirit, and
spirit and
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 all work together Possible spelling mistake found.diligentlydeli gently
deligently
 fulfil the client's requirements.

I would request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me in the above mentioned scenario by conducting This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 introduction session for the new Possible spelling mistake found.joiners
joinees
. Hope Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphto.to!to?to:to,to;
to


Yours faithfully


John Mathew

IELTS letter You have been facing a lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter: • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work/office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

125 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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