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You have been facing a lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter: • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work/office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems

You have been facing a lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter: • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work/office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems 5Y8p
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to the work environment in our office premises. I have been trasferred here from Hyderabad last week only. I was very excited to join my new workplace and meet new colleagues here in north India. But I have been facing a lot of discrimation by my fellow colleagues. We all come from diverse cultures and regions of India, and we should respect all people irrespective of their caste, creed or region. Furthermore, project is all about team spirit and we must all work together deligently fulfil the client's requirements. I would request you to please help me in the above mentioned scenario by conducting some introduction session for the new joinees. Hope to Yours faithfully John Mathew
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to the work environment in our office premises.

I have been
trasferred
here from Hyderabad last week
only
.
I
was
very
excited to
join
my new workplace and
meet
new colleagues here in north India.
But
I have been facing
a lot of
discrimation
by my
fellow colleagues
.

We all
come
from diverse cultures and regions of India, and we should respect all
people
irrespective of their caste, creed or region.
Furthermore
, project is all about team
spirit and
we
must
all work together
deligently
fulfil the client's requirements.

I would request you to
please
help
me in the above mentioned scenario by conducting
some
introduction session for the new
joinees
. Hope
to


Yours
faithfully


John Mathew
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IELTS letter You have been facing a lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter: • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work/office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
125 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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