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Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter. MDRN
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you with regards to the cheque book I had ordered in the name of my wife Sumita patel on 10th February 2020. I had ordered the cheque book through the online process started by your company and I had paid extra delivery charges for the premium delivery option. The site mentioned that the delivery will be within three working days. However, I am dissatisfied with the service your bank has provided. My wife is leaving for her trip tomorrow and she needs to carry that cheque book with her. I no longer can wait for the delivery and so I request you to handover my wife’s cheque book latest by tomorrow evening in person. I would appreciate this gesture or else I would think of shifting my account I another bank. I hope for a positive response from your end. Yours faithfully, Sara.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
with regards to
the
Possible spelling mistake. 'cheque' is British English.
cheque
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
I had ordered in the name of my wife
Possible spelling mistake found.
Sumita
Possible spelling mistake found.
patel
on 10th February 2020. I had ordered the
Possible spelling mistake. 'cheque' is British English.
cheque
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
through the online process
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
by your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and I had paid extra
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
delivery
charges for the premium
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
delivery
option.

The site mentioned that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
delivery
will be within three working days.
However
, I
am dissatisfied
with the service your bank has provided. My wife is leaving for her trip
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
tomorrow and
she needs to carry that
Possible spelling mistake. 'cheque' is British English.
cheque
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
with her.

I no longer can wait for the
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
delivery and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I request you to handover my wife’s
Possible spelling mistake. 'cheque' is British English.
cheque
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
A determiner is probably missing here: "the latest".
latest
by tomorrow evening in person. I would appreciate this gesture or else I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
of shifting my account I another bank.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope for a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sara.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
149 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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