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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter. In your letter: • Introduce yourself and let him / her know why you are writing to him / her • Express your gratitude • Offer him / her to visit your home with his / her family

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter. In your letter: • Introduce yourself and let him / her know why you are writing to him / her • Express your gratitude • Offer him / her to visit your home with his / her family byMl
Dear Sagar, I am writing this letter to thank you for all the help that you have extended when I met with an accident couple of weeks ago in Hyderabad. I am Manikanth Grandhi who was accompanied by you to the OPA hospital. I was staying in Hyderabad from a year with my wife and working for a private company. Last Monday when i am going to work i met with an accident and got injured. It was you, who decided to help me at that time. First of all, I am thanking you from the bottom of my heart for serving me when I need medical and emotional support. I am deeply indebted to you for everything. Moreover, I feel really honoured to know you very closely. You are no less than a god to me and i assure i will be with you going forward whenever you need me. Also, i am requesting you and your family to visit my house the coming weekend for lunch. This helps in creating a bond between our families and i can cherish these memories until we meet again. Looking forward to meeting you and your family soon. Yours Sincerely, Manikanth
Dear
Sagar
,

I am writing this letter to thank you for all the
help
that you have extended when I met with an accident couple of weeks ago in Hyderabad.

I am
Manikanth
Grandhi
who
was accompanied
by you to the OPA hospital.
I
was staying in Hyderabad from a year with my wife and working for a private
company
. Last Monday when
i
am going to work
i
met with an accident and
got
injured. It was you, who decided to
help
me at that time.

First of all
, I am thanking you from the bottom of my heart for serving me when I need medical and emotional support. I am
deeply
indebted to you for everything.
Moreover
, I feel
really
honoured
to know you
very
closely
. You are no less than a god to me and
i
assure
i
will be with you going forward whenever you need me.

Also
,
i
am requesting you and your family to visit my
house
the coming weekend for lunch. This
helps
in creating a bond between our families and
i
can cherish these memories until we
meet
again.

Looking forward to meeting you and your family
soon
.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Manikanth
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IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter. In your letter: • Introduce yourself and let him / her know why you are writing to him / her • Express your gratitude • Offer him / her to visit your home with his / her family

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  American English
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6.0
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