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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter

You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter eOkB
Dear Rahim Hope you are doing well, I’m doing fine, though my life is quiet hectic at the moment because, as you know recently I have moved to different house. Let me explain, such as my old house was pretty small, As well as parking spaces are not available most of the time therefore, recently local city Council noticed us it will be under construction within weeks. I am pleased to advise you that, a short time ago I have to bought a new house, Which is located near local city Corporation, this house is too big as well as front of my house has a big garden with Huge space for parking. As you know we are good friends since our childhood, so I want to invite you at my home when you will I will to visit please inform me, if you come at my house I will be very happy. I look forward to seeing you. Best regards, Shawon
Dear Rahim

Hope you are doing well,

I’m doing fine, though my life is
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quiet
hectic at the moment
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because
, as you know recently I have
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moved
to
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different
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house
.

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Let
me
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explain
, such as my
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old
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house
was pretty
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small
,
As well
as parking spaces are not available most of the time
therefore
, recently local city Council noticed us it will be under construction within weeks.

I am
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pleased
to advise you that, a short time ago I
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have to
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bought
a new
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house
, Which
is located
near local city Corporation, this
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house
is too
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big
as well
as front of my
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house
has a
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big
garden with Huge space for parking.

As you know we are
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good
friends since our childhood,
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so
I want to invite you at my home when you will I will to visit
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please
inform me, if you
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come
at my
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house
I will be
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very
happy.

I look forward to seeing you.

Best regards,

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Shawon
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IELTS letter You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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