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There are plans to build a new factory in parkland near where you live. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter give reasons why you are against the plans explain why the parkland should stay suggest what action the council should take

There are plans to build a new factory in parkland near where you live. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter give reasons why you are against the plans explain why the parkland should stay suggest what action the council should take YlqQ

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you as I heard about the project in the parkland. I was upset as I read about it because the parkland is the only green space which is in the near. A green space which is so important for a healthy environment and moreover it is a place where you can calm down and also where you can do exercises. In addition, it is a disadvantages for our nature, when we build everything over and the nature cannot grow anymore. Furthermore, I do not understand why you build there a factory when in the suburb is enough space for some new buildings. It is for animals, humans and for the nature a drawback. An appeal to you, please let the last green space in our town and build the factory in the suburb. I hope you will take my arguments to the project to the next council meeting. Also, I am looking forward to hearing about any news. Yours faithfully, Sabrina Riegg

Dear Sir or Madam,

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some
 new buildings. It is for animals, humans and for the nature a drawback. An appeal to you, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
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let
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 in our town and build the factory in the suburb.

I hope you will take my arguments to the project to the next
 council meeting.

Also
, I am looking forward to hearing about any news.

Yours faithfully
,

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