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You recently attended a local school in your community. We need people who can help with the renovation of the building, as well as some activities. Write a letter to the director and tell · How could you help? · When and why did you do this? · Who will help you?

You recently attended a local school in your community. We need people who can help with the renovation of the building, as well as some activities. Write a letter to the director and tell · How could you help? · When and why did you do this? · Who will help you? PM0LB
My name is Sandalu Sumudith and I work as a game developer in gaming unite. I am writing to inform you about the course which is related to my work field. It is the latest online course held by world famous gaming company, Ubisoft. Last week I saw some advertising related to this course and after that, I contacted them, and get more information about the course. 2D and 3D animation, character moulding are the main subjects in this lecture, as well as Dr. Tom, the most talented game designer is conducting this class. I think this lecture is important for numerous reasons. Of instance, when I completed this class I can handle many projects related game designs and furthermore, I can teach those things to our employees as well. It is the extremely good one I think. Well, I look to request about the time which I want to complete this class immediately. Programme was said they delivered class very friday, however I request them to speed-up the class for me and they agreed for it. So I need two week to complete this full course and I kindly requested to pass these days to me. I hope to be hearing you in the near future Yours Sincerely, Sandalu Sumudith
My name is
Sandalu
Sumudith
and I work as a game developer in gaming unite. I am writing to inform you about the
course
which
is related
to my work field.

It is the latest online
course
held by world
famous
gaming
company
, Ubisoft. Last week I
saw
some
advertising related to this
course
and after that, I contacted them, and
get
more information about the
course
. 2D and 3D animation, character
moulding
are the main subjects in this lecture,
as well
as Dr. Tom, the most talented game designer is conducting this
class
.

I
think
this lecture is
important
for numerous reasons. Of instance, when I completed this
class
I can handle
many
projects related game designs and
furthermore
, I can teach those things to our employees
as well
. It is the
extremely
good
one I
think
.

Well, I look to request about the time which I want to complete this
class
immediately.
Programme
was said
they delivered
class
very
friday
,
however
I request them to speed-up the
class
for
me and
they
agreed
for it.
So
I need two
week
to complete this full
course
and I kindly requested to pass these days to me.

I hope to
be hearing
you in the near future

Yours
Sincerely
,

Sandalu
Sumudith
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IELTS letter You recently attended a local school in your community. We need people who can help with the renovation of the building, as well as some activities. Write a letter to the director and tell · How could you help? · When and why did you do this? · Who will help you?

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6.0
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