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you have seen an advertisement of a valuable equipment, write a letter to your manager and ask to that production to be used in your company , Include following in your letter: what the equipment is how it can be useful for the company describe the procedure for buying the equipment

you have seen an advertisement of a valuable equipment, write a letter to your manager and ask to that production to be used in your company, Include following in your letter: what the equipment is how it can be useful for the company describe the procedure for buying the equipment j9eG1
Mr Campbell, As we have been told previously that we are welcome to suggest quality softwares that bring improvements to our work in company. I am going to introduce you to such a product for use. Yesterday while debugging the issue I came across such a tool named "Bugfender". This is a debug tool used mainly for adding and checking logs in code. The logged statements can be seen later on its dashboard. Not only as a debugger it also works as a crash analytics sending us crash reports in detailed format. This tool will make it easy to debug issues especially when they are hard to replicate. With help of this the time consumed in finding the root cause will be cut off as we can track the main bug by logs. Currently a big amount of time gets consumed in finding the bug than fixing it. And we need to debug code almost every day for live applications. Hence it will be a time saver. Furthermore crashes can be fixed before it is being reported by client with the help of crash reports. This tool is free for use and also provides a premium version. In free version it limits us to check the the logs up to current day only. Whereas in premium version we can check all the logs til date. The premium can be purchased from the website of tool. Firstly you need to create an account on the website. Then select the Buy Premium and proceed the transaction. If really hope you will purchase this product very soon. So that we can start taking advantage of it. Best Regards, Joya
Mr Campbell, As we have been
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told
previously that we are welcome to suggest quality
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softwares
that bring improvements to our work in
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company
. I am going to introduce you to such a product for
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use
.

Yesterday while debugging the issue I came across such a
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tool
named
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Bugfender
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. This is a debug
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tool
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used
mainly
for adding and checking
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logs
in code. The logged statements can be
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seen
later on its dashboard. Not
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only
as a debugger it
also
works as a
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crash
analytics sending us
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crash
reports in detailed format.

This
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tool
will
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make
it easy to debug issues
especially
when they are
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hard
to replicate. With
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help
of this the time consumed in finding the root cause will be
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cut
off as we can
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track
the main bug by
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logs
.
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Currently
a
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big
amount of time
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gets
consumed in finding the bug than fixing it. And we need to debug code almost every day for
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live
applications.
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Hence
it will be a time saver.
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Furthermore
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crashes
can be
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fixed
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before
it is
being reported
by client with the
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help
of
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crash
reports.

This
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tool
is free for
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use
and
also
provides a premium version. In free version it limits us to
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check
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the the
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logs
up to
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current
day
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only
.
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Whereas
in premium version we can
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check
all the
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logs
til date. The premium can be
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purchased
from the website of
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tool
.
Firstly
you need to create an account on the website. Then select the
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Buy
Premium and proceed the transaction.

“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
really
hope you will
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purchase
this product
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very
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soon
.
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So that
we can
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start
taking advantage of it.

Best Regards,
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Joya
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IELTS letter you have seen an advertisement of a valuable equipment, write a letter to your manager and ask to that production to be used in your company, Include following in your letter: what the equipment is how it can be useful for the company describe the procedure for buying the equipment

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  American English
6 paragraphs
275 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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