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I would like a job in bank as a cashier

I would like a job in bank as a cashier N8k2q
Dear Sir or Madam. I'm writing to apply for the position of cashier of the bank, as advertised on local newspaper. I have included my resume for your consideration. In addition to experience as a cashier. I have an excellent knowledge of finance and accounting and in my previous job I have had a lot of success while I was there, I developed training program for new hires. However, I had to leave my job to a move to your city. Thank you for your time and consideration. I will follow up next week to see if I can offer any more information about my skills and experience. My cell phone is +998913773588 and my email is gulzira. applicat@email. com
Dear Sir or Madam. I'm writing to apply for the position of cashier of the bank, as advertised on local newspaper. I have included my resume for your consideration.
In addition
to experience as a cashier. I have an excellent knowledge of finance and accounting and in my previous job I have had
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a lot of
success while I was there, I developed training program for new hires.
However
, I had to
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leave
my job to a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
to your city. Thank you for your time and consideration. I will follow up
next
week to
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see
if I can offer any more information about my
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skills
and experience. My cell phone is +998913773588 and my email is
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gulzira
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applicat@email
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com
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IELTS letter I would like a job in bank as a cashier

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  American English
1 paragraphs
119 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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