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a mail to my best friend about the trip tomorrow

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Dear Linda, How are you? I am so excited and happy when think about tomorrow. I haven't seen you for 5 years. We can play badminton, have lunch together and see the birds fly in the sky. That's wonderful. I will go to your house at 9: 00 am. Do you have my phone number. It's 0912345678See you tomorrowYour friendlily dsgfdehdgsdbjsbjdbjsh, s, jdh, msd n cnbdsb, adnkjbdkhehgfukewffhnddsjbsdcsdjshkjwdh, jsadukehjkfhjsn, sdjndkjfidbfj, dsvb, sdfjierwoqjfkmlihelsdweihdkshdjhdkhdskjadhkuhjhwelidekuwhdkuhdeduhdeucyfyvnvhghghgghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhgjgjgnkhkfhbchjbjkhjkhhkjhjjjhhjhjhkkhkhkhkkhkgdsgksdauryhew, jhiuryhewkl

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IELTS letter a mail to my best friend about the trip tomorrow

Letter

American English

2 paragraphs

71 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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