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a mail to my best friend about the trip tomorrow

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Dear Linda, How are you? I am so excited and happy when think about tomorrow. I haven't seen you for 5 years. We can play badminton, have lunch together and see the birds fly in the sky. That's wonderful. I will go to your house at 9: 00 am. Do you have my phone number. It's 0912345678See you tomorrowYour friendlily dsgfdehdgsdbjsbjdbjsh, s, jdh, msd n cnbdsb, adnkjbdkhehgfukewffhnddsjbsdcsdjshkjwdh, jsadukehjkfhjsn, sdjndkjfidbfj, dsvb, sdfjierwoqjfkmlihelsdweihdkshdjhdkhdskjadhkuhjhwelidekuwhdkuhdeduhdeucyfyvnvhghghgghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhgjgjgnkhkfhbchjbjkhjkhhkjhjjjhhjhjhkkhkhkhkkhkgdsgksdauryhew, jhiuryhewkl
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IELTS letter a mail to my best friend about the trip tomorrow

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  American English
2 paragraphs
71 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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