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WRITE A TEACHER NEAR BY YOU REGARNING YOU WANT TO JOIN A LANGUAGE CLASS

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Dear Madam, I am writing this letter to let you know that I would like to learn French. One of my friends informed me as you provide French tuition. I am planning to migrate to Canada for that reason, would like to join your classes. Let me explain my situation. I had been attended a French tutorial at well known institution in city which have more than 100 students in class, where as the mentors are unable to concentrate on each student. After the class I appeared the exam and failed. Because of your excellence in teaching, I would like to participate your classes. Could I be informed regarding admission procedures and fees. Please write me, if there will be available seats. My address is; flat number 23, Beach road, Mounden village. And my contact number is 4549824597. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Kikky
Dear Madam,

I am writing this letter to
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let
you know that I would like to learn French. One of my friends informed me as you provide French tuition. I am planning to migrate to Canada for that reason, would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
your classes.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation. I had
been attended
a French tutorial at well known institution in city which have more than 100 students in
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class
,
Did you mean "whereas"?
where as
the mentors are unable to concentrate on each student. After the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
I appeared the exam and failed.
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Because
of your excellence in teaching, I would like to participate your classes.

Could I
be informed
regarding admission procedures and fees.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
write me, if there will be available seats. My address is; flat number 23, Beach road,
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Mounden
village. And my contact number is 4549824597.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Kikky
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IELTS letter WRITE A TEACHER NEAR BY YOU REGARNING YOU WANT TO JOIN A LANGUAGE CLASS

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  American English
7 paragraphs
145 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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