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A letter from myself in 2030

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Hello, my Former self! I want to write about today’s world and changes in community. I am pleased to report that all modification is occurring for the better. International relations among countries have been enhanced for the last ten years and our world is peaceful. People are living in brotherhood regardless of their nationality, race, language and religion. Currently, there are changes in every sphere and I want to write about the most important ones. Firstly, I am going to begin from education. Now I am working as a teacher at school and I have witnessed many ameliorations in education system. When we were students, education system was different. Today students are being taught according to new innovative methods, instructions and tools. Boring and ineffective classbooks are being out of use. For example, computer science workbook was elementary and designed for users. At the moment it consists of complex information which can help learners to gain enough IT knowledge and this subject is taught two times more than it was. There are computers with Internet access in every classroom. Moreover, demand for learning foreign languages is very high. Especially, English textbooks for students overcome great improvements as the number of students who know foreign languages is increasing day by day. Students are also more interested in learning these subjects because the people who mastered computer science and foreign languages can find high paid works easily. Technology has had a major impact on education. It is helpful for both students and teachers. Online schooling and tutoring has become popular. Everyone can get free education everywhere because of free educational platforms. Many leaners get involved in them to strengthen their knowledge and master at their own speed. Personally, I found a study center for English learners and it has involved more than hundred applicants. I also established online education. Besides, I prepare video lessons and place them on my YouTube channel. The view of cities and countries has altered dramatically too. Traffic jam is not a major problem as I thought. Additional subways and roads have been built. Skyscrapers are decorating our capital. Industrial zones are also flourishing day by day. Though people’s number has grown and various robots or machines have been invented, there are enough vacancies for employees. As other spheres, medicine has been developed and some kind of disorders are not a problem any more. For instance, there are effective assistive listening devices which enable deaf people to be in a relationship with others. Or if you have a disc herniation, you do not have to do exercises for a long time or undergo surgery to treat it. All these progresses make people’s life easier. I hope the world will continue to change in a positive way.
Hello, my Former self!

I want to write about
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today
’s world and
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changes
in community. I am
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pleased
to report that all modification is occurring for the better. International relations among countries have
been enhanced
for the last ten years and our world is peaceful.
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People
are living in brotherhood regardless of their nationality, race,
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language
and religion.
Currently
, there are
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changes
in every sphere and I want to write about the most
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important
ones.

Firstly
, I am going to
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begin
from
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education
.
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Now
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many
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ameliorations
in
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education
system. When we were
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students
,
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education
system was
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different
.
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Today
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students
are
being taught
according to new innovative methods, instructions and tools. Boring and ineffective
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classbooks
are being out of
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use
.
For example
, computer science workbook was elementary and designed for users. At the moment it consists of complex information which can
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help
learners to gain
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enough
IT knowledge and this subject
is taught
two times more than it was. There are computers with Internet access in every classroom.
Moreover
, demand for learning foreign
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languages
is
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very
high.
Especially
, English textbooks for
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students
overcome great improvements as the number of
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students
who know foreign
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languages
is increasing day by day.
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Students
are
also
more interested in learning these subjects
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because
the
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people
who mastered computer science and foreign
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languages
can find high paid works
easily
.

Technology has had a major impact on
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education
. It is helpful for both
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students
and teachers. Online schooling and tutoring has become popular. Everyone can
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get
free
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education
everywhere
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because
of free educational platforms.
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Many
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leaners
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get
involved in them to strengthen their knowledge and master at their
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own
speed.
Personally
, I found a study center for English learners and it has involved more than
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hundred
applicants. I
also
established online
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education
.
Besides
, I prepare video lessons and place them on my YouTube channel.

The view of cities and countries has altered
dramatically
too. Traffic jam is not a major problem as I
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thought
. Additional subways and roads have
been built
. Skyscrapers are decorating our capital. Industrial zones are
also
flourishing day by day. Though
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people’s
number has grown and various robots or machines have
been invented
, there are
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enough
vacancies for employees. As other spheres, medicine has
been developed
and
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some
kind of disorders are not a problem
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any more
.
For instance
, there are effective assistive listening devices which enable deaf
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people
to be in a relationship with others. Or if you have a disc herniation, you do not
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have to
do exercises for a long time or undergo surgery to treat it.

All these progresses
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make
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people’s
life easier. I hope the world will continue to
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change
in a
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positive
way.
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IELTS letter A letter from myself in 2030

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  American English
6 paragraphs
458 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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