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You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference. Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted

You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference. Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted KQEL
Respected SIr, I am writing this letter to inform you about content of the conference attended on 2nd January 2021. Topic of the conference was compulsory safety measures to be practised by all organisations in Covid 19 scenario. According to government policy all organisations are strictly recommended to follow certain preventive measures. Firstly, all the employees in the orgnisation should wear personal protective equipments like mask and gloves to prevent the spread of the virus. Moreover, workers are expected to maintain social distancing with in the working environment. However, staff fail to follow these precautionary steps will be penalised. Employees experiencing health issues should report to the supervisor as soon as possible. This presentation is expected for a time period of one hour and these topics will be covered in depth. All the employees in the organisation should attend the presentation. Program will start at 1 pm on 15th February 2021 at conference hall. I request your permission to conduct the presentation. Yours faithfully, Jaise
Respected
SIr
,

I am writing this letter to inform you about content of the conference attended on 2nd January 2021. Topic of the conference was compulsory safety measures to be
practised
by all
organisations
in
Covid 19
scenario. According to
government
policy all
organisations
are
strictly
recommended to follow
certain preventive measures.

Firstly
, all the employees in the
orgnisation
should wear personal protective equipments like mask and gloves to
prevent
the spread of the virus.
Moreover
, workers are
expected
to maintain social distancing with in the working environment.
However
, staff fail to follow these precautionary steps will be
penalised
. Employees experiencing health issues should report to the supervisor as
soon
as possible. This presentation is
expected
for a time period of one hour and these topics will
be covered
in depth. All the employees in the
organisation
should attend the presentation. Program will
start
at 1 pm on 15th February 2021 at conference hall.

I request your permission to conduct the presentation.

Yours
faithfully
,

Jaise
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IELTS letter You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference. Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted

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6.0
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