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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do. PGBK
Dear Sir, I am wiring this epistle to convey that I will need a week off from my current course on personality development. As my communication skills are poor, therefore I have enrolled this course before one month. This course duration is for two months however, I need to take a week off due to unforeseen circumstances. I was travelling from college to my home and my bike got slipped, as a result my right ankle got sprained. Therefore, I immediately consulted my family doctor and he suggested to take complete bed rest for one week. Thus, if I do not give rest to my leg than, severity will get increased and I might have to take off for two or more weeks. I would request you to grant me leave for one week and additionally I request to have online classes for me, so that days will not be wasted. Otherwise, if you could extend my course duration beyond two months, so that my study will not be lost. I hope you understand the situation and accordingly the decision will be taken. Yours faithfully, Ashish Vekariya
Dear Sir,

I am wiring this epistle to convey that I will need a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
week
off from my
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current
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course
on personality development.

As my communication
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
are poor,
therefore
I have enrolled this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
one month. This
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course
duration is for two months
however
, I need to take a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
week
off due to unforeseen circumstances.

I was travelling from college to my home and my bike
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
slipped,
as a result
my right ankle
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
sprained.
Therefore
, I immediately consulted my family
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doctor and
he
The verb 'suggested' is used with the gerund form: "suggested taking".
suggested to take
complete bed rest for one
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week
.
Thus
, if I do not give rest to my leg than, severity will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
increased and I might
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have to
take off for two or more weeks.

I would request you to grant me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
for one
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week
and
additionally
I request to have online classes for me,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that days will not
be wasted
.
Otherwise
, if you could extend my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
duration beyond two months,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that my study will not
be lost
.

I hope you understand the situation and
accordingly
the decision will
be taken
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ashish
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Vekariya

IELTS letter You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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