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You have been facing a lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter: • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work/office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

You have been facing a lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter: • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work/office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, eLmJ
Dear Sir or Madam, This letter is to report many issues faced by me in office in recent times. I am one of your subordinate and reporting to you. I have joined this organization recently. Lately, I am facing issues at work which I would like to report. Firstly, I would like to draw your attention to cleanliness at workplace. As we work in rotational shifts as we are part of business operations. People from different shifts do not take proper care of shared kitchennets and work areas are left without proper cleanliness. As you know we all are in this pandamic, Atleast disposing used cups and bottels in dust bins are expected from each responsible employee. Secondly, As you are well aware off my new project. As being a project leader, I shared a time table and responsibilities and people are not adhereing to this responsibilities. As you being a reporting manager. I request you to please provide proper instructions and spread a word accross teams to take proper measures when it comes to handling responsibilities and maintaining cleanliness around work area. Regards, Thakur Aashish Singh
Dear Sir or Madam,

This letter is to report
many
issues faced by me in office in recent times. I am one of your subordinate and reporting to you. I have
joined
this organization recently. Lately, I am facing issues at
work
which I would like to report.

Firstly
, I would like to draw your attention to cleanliness at workplace. As we
work
in rotational shifts as we are part of business operations.
People
from
different
shifts do not take
proper
care of shared
kitchennets
and
work
areas are
left
without
proper
cleanliness. As you know we all are in this
pandamic
,
Atleast
disposing
used
cups and
bottels
in dust bins are
expected
from each responsible employee.

Secondly
, As you are well aware off my new project. As being a project leader, I shared a time table and responsibilities and
people
are not
adhereing
to
this
responsibilities.

As
you being a reporting manager. I request you to
please
provide
proper
instructions and spread a word
accross
teams to take
proper
measures when it
comes
to handling responsibilities and maintaining cleanliness around
work
area.

Regards,

Thakur
Aashish
Singh
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IELTS letter You have been facing a lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter: • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work/office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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  American English
7 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
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