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You recently applied for two separate jobs. Both have chosen to hire you, but you must write a letter to one of them explaining why you are unable to take the position. Include in your letter: - An apology - An explanation of your situation

You recently applied for two separate jobs. Both have chosen to hire you, but you must write a letter to one of them explaining why you are unable to take the position. Include in your letter: - An apology - An explanation of your situation 7LnGy
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Alison Argent who has been recently offered the position of Electrical Engineer in your company and I am very grateful for the opportunity; however, I regret that I am unable to accept the offer right now. I have known your company for decades and I am really appreciate your time in checking my curriculum vitae. No words can express my gratitude for this opportunity; nevertheless I would like to sincerely apologize not only for no longer being able to take this position but also for the inconvenience you will have to face recruiting another candidate. The reason behind for not accepting your company's position is that I have been received another offer from CEB a week ago and I have already signed a three-year contract agreement with them. Therefore, I would be grateful if you understand my situation. I am positive that in the future I will have a chance to work and be a part of the success of your company and I would really like to obtain valuable experience from esteemed establishment even if I have to work at a less salary. Yours faithfully, Alison Argent.
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Alison Argent who has been recently offered the position of Electrical Engineer in your
company and
I am
very
grateful for the opportunity;
however
, I regret that I am unable to accept the offer right
now
.

I have known your
company
for
decades and
I am
really
appreciate
your time in checking my curriculum vitae. No words can express my gratitude for this opportunity;
nevertheless
I would like to
sincerely
apologize not
only
for no longer being able to take this position
but
also
for the inconvenience you will
have to
face recruiting another candidate.

The reason behind for not accepting your
company
's position is that I have
been received
another offer from CEB a week ago and I have already signed a three-year contract agreement with them.
Therefore
, I would be grateful if you understand my situation.

I am
positive
that in the future I will have a chance to work and be a part of the success of your
company
and I would
really
like to obtain valuable experience from esteemed establishment even if I
have to
work at a less salary.

Yours
faithfully
, Alison Argent.
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IELTS letter You recently applied for two separate jobs. Both have chosen to hire you, but you must write a letter to one of them explaining why you are unable to take the position. Include in your letter: - An apology - An explanation of your situation

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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