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A letter to the person who saved your life

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I'm Nathasha Welhenage whom you saved recently from a car accident on 20th August at Hill Street, Dehiwala. I'm writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude to you because the way you act at that time was incredible and unbelievable. Actually, if you haven't taken instant measures as soon as I met with the accident, By now I might not exist. Further, I really appreciate all support you have given me during the accident, and it was one of the precious moments in my life. Moreover, I think that you have done the moral duty that most people don't do in such a situation rather panic. Please accept my family's heart-filled thanks for the tremendous support you have given to us. Please visit us with your family at any time convenient for you. I'm residing in No 1, Hill Street, Dehiwala next to the family supermarket in hill street.
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Nathasha
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Welhenage
whom you saved recently from a car accident on 20th August at Hill Street,
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Dehiwala
. I'm writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude to you
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the way you act at that time was incredible and unbelievable.

Actually, if you haven't taken instant measures as
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as I met with the accident, By
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I might not exist.
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appreciate all support you have
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me during the accident, and it was one of the precious moments in my life.
Moreover
, I
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think
that you have done the moral duty that most
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people
don't do in such a situation
rather
panic.
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accept my family's heart-filled thanks for the tremendous support you have
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given
to us.

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visit us with your family at any time convenient for you. I'm residing in No 1, Hill Street,
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Dehiwala
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to the family supermarket in hill street.
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IELTS letter A letter to the person who saved your life

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
150 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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