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Write a letter to an administrator at your university and include: Who you are The problem What you suggest they do

Write a letter to an administrator at your university and include: Who you are The problem What you suggest they do 0lRG9

To Miss Charlos, My name is Alex. I am a student of Computer Engineering of Batch 2019 and I am residing in Newton Girls hostel. I have been sharing room 301 with Jaime since last month. I am writing you this letter to bring your attention to issues which I have been facing with my roommate. My roommate is nocturnal, thus she likes to study till early mornings. Due to which she keeps the light on for the whole night and my sleep gets disturbed. If I do not get enough sleep, I find it very hard to concentrate in class. I have tried to speak to her, however she did not appear receptive to make immediate changes. I understand every person has their own routine, nevertheless if persons with similar habits make hostel life easy. I came to believe that hostel room allocation is completed, though I would like to request you to allocate another room to me. If alteration is Yours sincerely, Alex

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My name is Alex. I am a student of Computer Engineering of Batch Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).2019, and
2019 and
 I am residing in Newton Girls hostel. I have been sharing room 301 with Jaime since last month.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am writing you this letter to bring your attention to issues which I have been facing with my roommate. My roommate is nocturnal, thus
 she likes to study till early mornings. Due to which she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
keeps
 the light on for the whole night and my sleep This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 disturbed. If I do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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enough
 sleep, I find it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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hard
 to concentrate in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
. I have tried to speak to her, however
 she did not appear receptive to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 immediate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
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.

I understand every person has their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 routine, nevertheless
 if persons with similar habits This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 hostel life easy. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Yours sincerely
,

Alex