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You are an online store manager. The delivery was delayed.

You are an online store manager. The delivery was delayed. AjD0L
Please accept my sincere appology for the package was delayed. I am one of the nanager an online shop. I understand this has caused a lit if inconvinence to the client and our company. I can not defend my actions, but I want to tell you that a pandemic period was made such inconvenient situation. Our good was kept fir 14 days in custom office in order to check and test therefore, cargo was detained. Aslso I got confused and mistakenly sent to the wrong address. I am truly sorry for such a loust mistake. I want you to know that the delivery fee would be free fir you. I understand your dissanppointment and I am truly sorry I can assure tou that this mistake will never be repeated in the future. Yours sincerely. Flora Watson.
Please
accept my sincere
appology
for the package
was delayed
. I am one of the
nanager
an online shop. I understand this has caused a lit if
inconvinence
to the client and our
company
.
I
can not defend my actions,
but
I want to
tell
you that a pandemic period
was made
such inconvenient situation. Our
good
was
kept
fir 14 days in custom office in order to
check
and
test
therefore
, cargo
was detained
.
Aslso
I
got
confused and
mistakenly
sent
to the
wrong
address. I am
truly
sorry for such a
loust
mistake. I want you to know that the delivery fee would be free fir you.
I
understand your
dissanppointment and
I am
truly
sorry I can assure
tou
that this mistake will never
be repeated
in the future. Yours
sincerely
. Flora Watson.
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IELTS letter You are an online store manager. The delivery was delayed.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
136 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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